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RE: Ciphers; From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Parth Three Chapter Eight
The bitch as a God damn New Zion commander!
Not sure on this one: as or is Oh and I think commander should be capitalized Commander
The bitch as a God damn New Zion commander!
Not sure on this one: as or is Oh and I think commander should be capitalized Commander
Congratulation on winning pibara's @croupierbot lottery with this comment.
The word "is" would be okay here, since Pete believes that it is a fact that Rachella is a commander. However, I think "was" would be better since that entire paragraph is dealing in the past tense. The word "commander" should not be capitalized here because Rachella is assumed to be just one, and she's not being referred to as "Commander Rachella" or "Commander [whatever Rachella's last name is]".
Thank you. I am learning as I go, and trying to help @pibara out. I am glad you are lending a hand also. I did not even think past tense on the above, so thanks again.