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RE: SLC21/WK6: Understanding Burns: Types, Causes, and First Aid Responses
Student Name: @fajrulakmal99
Overall grade: 9
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided the course of action in this specific situation . Good work | Important details are missing such as the student didn't mention prioritizing their own safety first. This is a very important step. There's no mention of gloves or a wrapper. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 2 | the student listed down the course of action for an electrical burn. | [Grade: 2] | |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency chemical burning scenario. | The medical emergency team is called immediately and not to he left out as a last resort option. During the initial first aid step, the burn site wasn't washed long enough. The patient should be checked for signs of shock and cardiac arrest and in case there are any, go for Cardio Pulmonary resuscitation. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present their logic in choosing the answer. The ethics as well as the Triage dictate that the patient with a 2nd degree burn should be treated first as the patient with a third degree burn has his nerves damaged so currently he is not in severe pain whereas the patient with a 2nd degree burn might be going through excruciating pain and if not attended immediately would be left with grave consequences. Good work. | There are markdown issues which kill the essence of the post. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 5 | the student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2] |
General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this week's course. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1