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RE: SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid"
Student Name: @ruthjoe
Time of checking: After 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [8.0/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared a compelling personal experience, emphasizing the emotional impact and desire to have known first aid, which reflects well on the importance of response skills in emergencies. | Additional details about what happened to the friend after collapsing could improve clarity, as would expanding on specific actions that might have helped manage the situation before help arrived. Also, the real question was what would have been different and what actions you would have taken as a first responder in that situation. Good effort overall. | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 2 | Thoroughly explained each DRABC protocol step, demonstrating a solid understanding of how to manage a road accident scene. | Please aim to provide detailed explanations for each step, such as what alternative actions could be taken if there are hazards roadside, and how you would manage if any of the DRABC steps cannot be completed. Some aspects of handling the airway and circulation checks could also be clarified. When checking pulse and breathing, remember to avoid excessive movement of the casualty, especially if a spinal injury is suspected. Emphasize gently clearing the airway without unnecessary movement. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 3 | Created a visual flowchart of the DRABC protocol, including username as per assignment instructions. | The visual is good; however, making it clearer and more detailed regarding each step would enhance comprehension. Try to ensure all parts of DRABC are visually represented with brief descriptions for better clarity. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 4 | Provided a well-rounded list of emergency contacts relevant to Nigeria, covering essential services as required. | Adding a brief description for each number's purpose would improve clarity. To make the list even more comprehensive, consider including contacts for mental health support, women's services, child protection, and national suicide prevention. | [Grade: 1.1] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz successfully, showing understanding of the week's lesson. | 10 out of 10 questions were correct. Good job overall. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Overall, your responses reflect a solid grasp of the DRABC protocol, with thoughtful personal experience and careful attention to safety in emergency scenarios. Improving clarity in explanations and details within each response step will further strengthen your submissions. Great job with the quiz and visual presentation!
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03