Great suspence building, great climax. I liked the head poking up moment, it was unexpected and the perfect element for giving a gloomy direction to the story. Was it his mother's head?
Great suspence building, great climax. I liked the head poking up moment, it was unexpected and the perfect element for giving a gloomy direction to the story. Was it his mother's head?
8-) I actually thought it might be Ms. Janken's head. I was thinking that Theo's mum's house was a mile away and he was going to have to go through town to get there. And the I saw a 750 word count with lots more on the way. I began to edit down and ended up with this.