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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #41: Hunt More Precious than a Green Stone
@dirge, Why does it have to end?!? I was pumped the entire way through. I loved the creature and the way that he talked.
@dirge, Why does it have to end?!? I was pumped the entire way through. I loved the creature and the way that he talked.
why end there? 500 word limit.
next part would be battle.
then arny has to do the job for the witch, something with a green stone.
then arny has to get the stone through some conflict. the result is the creature's return v2. battle sequence.
then final resolution between the witch, arny the creature. but that would all take like 6000 words.
nice prompt. fun noir.
[Breathes-n-wheezes in Serialized-posting and extended posts.]
I'll be waiting. lol