RE: Finish the Story contest, week n. 40 - Hunt Down The Bananafish!
Ah, what a lovely entry that dares befall upon me laps. I must humour this thought before it leaves my mind like a fly. So, Dr. @f3nix, it seems as thou hast arriv'd at a great hour, indeed a Red Letter Week! Hush now, for I seem the jitteryness of thy soul without a need for thee to speak yet. As the story hath done thy reply a great service! Indeed! It too knows how to come alive! I see the yearnings and the history pouring into this story while the story reflects all the contests done to one solid stream. From the mention of the first of the @bananafish's first operations to that of Yoh (really a prison built around Fortuna's Freedom) to that of now with its first awakening after a long slumber.
Reise reise! Indeed, without the need for a true-esque ending, the @bananafish had done them in. The Colonel no more, and the crew an unfortunate accident standing in the way of the true hunters. Now may the feast begin @bananafish! Now I can watch thee slaughter them without mercy, ha hargh! I shall enjoy front-row tickets like those people who saw the American Civil War on the battlefields themself early in the war. Now may the bloodsport begin!
Apologies Master Felix for the late reply! You know all the stuff that's happening and typing is becoming a little harder given the due family time! Yes a merciless slaughter was indeed what they deserved for their hybris sin. I have to say that participating was fun.. I could start to get into it.