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RE: 16 days of literature: Particle Ghost

~Uw-peckin’-wU~ Thanks for reading, philosophizing, comprehending and complimenting my post!~ Indeed, had to play up the cuteness factor for goaty, but it played well with the kitty one next where I applied my, supposedly, trademark style here. But yes, three perspectives: the bland reality, speaker and actions (crude fact, the displaced Subject and the rendered Object, respectively, coming together to form a scene). All fun to make respectively and with each other.

Now to the completely trans-lesbo scene; lesbiab, biab biab. Anywho, that blind drawing was perfect for something intimate, especially with the poking fingers to the cheeks. And I felt rather describing the two lovely people before they acted upon their intimacy, the frustrations, the pulls-n-tugs and the reveal that finally gives way to Cupid doing best what Cupid does (lovey-dovey shit :D : D :D :D). But tak, I did want to allow multiple perspectives to pour into the bland reality description I was laying down here, from those that are couples, to outsiders and those coming into a relationship. And yer analysis, mój Ukochany, be spot on but I like to add “reminded off” before “seeing her lover” - the act of Jouissance and signification all playing into the entirity of the 300-word-mono-paragraph. Even then, the analysis goes unhindered from here once again.

Like to see yer FTS essay!
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