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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #36 - @bananafish
Great finish off the story, like the idea of ex-agent, you never know who we have in our surroundings people may look simple and not important but being polite and caring sometimes rewards like in the case of Susie. Like the way you describe the characters, easy to follow your idea and like the development of events.