Thank you very much... To tell the truth this is the third version, I've spent this entire weekend tackling it, the first half just had sooo many intricate details, i just couldn't figure out how to address most of it in under the word count. I dreamed about it even.

I did botch the Polish name, it should have been Dudzinski... meaning piper, as in someone playing bagipes. There are probably more mistakes in there too. That's what you get when humans try to make order out of chaos...

Anyway, Thanks again for your time reading it, and also for the encouraging comment.