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RE: A Finishthestory Short Story: The Extraordinary Café

I enjoyed your ending very much. It makes perfect sense now, why Matt was so obsessed in the beginning. You did a great job of bringing him back to reality through the uncle. I like how you carried on the brownie theme and made it a central part of the story. @theironfelix did such a good job of making that brownie come alive! It was nice at the end that Matt seems to be able to move on now. Both characters are believable and real.

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Thank you @sevendust04 for all your appreciation. Glad you liked the brownies.

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