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RE: Bananafish Denouement: Finish the Story Contest #40
Superb change in viewpoint. Simple but powerful build up to a satisfying end. Be ready to step up to take your trophy.
Keep Steemin!
Superb change in viewpoint. Simple but powerful build up to a satisfying end. Be ready to step up to take your trophy.
Keep Steemin!
I appreciate that! @theironfelix certainly served up an energetic prompt this time!
I agree, an excellent change of rhythm and pov. It's a great pleasure to read your unique interpretation of the first half. Your banana-social critique is poignant and your writing style flows so pleasantly. Bravo @agmoore! I'm happy to read you again :-)
Thank you! It's the first time I read the Salinger story. It helped me to find an opening for my story in @theironfelix's setup. So much energy in @theironfelix--wanted to do it justice.
He's a living dynamo! ..And your writing is strong but fine at the same time.