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RE: X Marks The Spot (Finish The Story 60th Edition Entry!)
Drugs, revenge and death. Sweet ending, the build up of tension and then at the very end the blow! A change of focus to the "Bryant" and an ending where Jon survives- well crafted.
It took me a while to figure out a way that might, at least maybe carry the connection, hopefully the "Bryant" element kind of helped, although it may have just confused it. Awww I am so glad you enjoyed it <3 i really had fun playing with the concepts! Thank you!