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RE: The Yellow King - A Finish the Fiction Story
Great story ending @brisby
I really like the nuanced plot development with the chess piece as a focus and catalyst for memory. Real shiver-up-the-spine stuff 🙂
Thanks for commenting Raj! I'm glad that you enjoyed my story!
I don't do subtle very well so I was happy to read your comment. (I think I was born with a flashlight on beneath my chin and came out saying "Mwahahaha!" The doctor was probably creeped out. Though, it would explain a few things...😉)