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RE: The Breach: Finish the Story Week #32
I think it works @agmoore and more than that, the writing is fantastic. Your inverted end/beginning brings a lovely deep characterization to the couple that @f3nix hints at in his beginning. The whole alternate dimension angle is also a direction that I didn't expect, I love a good surprise :-) Really well done!
P.s. It's a million miles from the direction I took with mine which is nearly finished now.
Thanks @raj808! Can't wait to read it :)
Me too!