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RE: Vanilla (Finish The Story #64 Entry)
An impeccable narrative. I sincerely congratulate @gaby-crb and her great talent.
First I must say that the smell of coffee, freshly made, aromatizing the house is a wonder to start the day. Just the smell !!
I would keep the first final (Timeline A). The narrative is suspenseful and catches the reader with a very subtle vanilla flavor. Best regards @calluna. Thank you for sharing this beautiful narrative text.
Thank you very much, that is an awesome comment, I love hearing what people prefer, and what works for them, I had fun writing B, but A was more my style anyway ;)
Thank you! <3