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RE: Symphony From The Past (A Tale of Werewolves)
The description of Joelle's trance reminds me of the effects of ecstasy.
Your writing is very good, I only found strange the word "gnash" but you tricked me until the very end, I didn't expect the last line.
Haha
Thanks a lot for the compliment
I actually had an issue with revealing the werewolf part. I knew I didn't want to reveal that directly though. After much thought, I decided to simply save it for the last line and add a clue in the title