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RE: The Stage: Entry into Finish the Story Contest #25
Nice ending! Ancient religious archetipes, fertility rites, sacrifice, all is very well linked to the theme of the carnival festival!
Nice ending! Ancient religious archetipes, fertility rites, sacrifice, all is very well linked to the theme of the carnival festival!
Thank you--though I do agree with @theironfelix, perhaps lacking in originality. Fire doesn't burn bright every time I strike a match :) I appreciate your feedback!