Ok, I just got the finish the story thing hahaha I hadn't seen this in another post I read with the same theme so when I started on yours I was like, "I already read this, what the hell?" My bad!

Now to your part, I love that you jumped to the other ship. Or that's how I read it anyway. Knowing where you're coming from and wanting to be authentic with the language, I LOVE love love that you chose to incorporate that into the story. The entire fight was purely to cleanse the language. I think that's genius and kind of hilarious. It's such a cool character motivator.

Such a shame the black haired pirate got the best of him! I did not see that coming. It's a great twist to a very well written ending. Thanks so much for sharing! I'm getting some good entertainment reading all these pirate stories. Cheers!