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RE: The Extraordinary Café - Finish The Story #48
Great ending.
His hand instinctively reached for the small velvet box in his pocket.
Nice touch.
Great ending.
His hand instinctively reached for the small velvet box in his pocket.
Nice touch.
hahaha ahhhhh can't beat a good pun ;)
It's not fair, I'm lost in translation! I didn't understand the pun...
Nice touch, as in a nice addition to the story, but also its him touching his pocket ;)
Oh! Now, I get it!