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RE: Mental burnout, leave note at door
I loved the change of pov and I've been intrigued by some of your figures of speech like the hyperbole "not even morphine could quell the spasms". Also, I liked this poetic fragment: "As now the night only becomes the young child it shall be when the sun dives below the horizon".
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments!
You got some good eyes, me matey, to notice these details. I feel nice that you noticed those details in my writing! ~^^~