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RE: Short Story for Finishthestory contest
This is a beautiful beginning of a dark fantasy novel. I would have never imagined such a rich development for my first part of the prompt. I grandly appreciated your traditional prose and accurate descriptions. Probably the final paragraph is a bit cliché with the dream/not dream escamotage, but I understand that in a 500 words story format it is a good solution. Congrats for the curie vote and such an inspiring ending.
Thank You! I wanted a cliff hanger but could not manage it. I love your story and your comment.
Keep Steemin!
You're welcome. This is one of those stories that stand out. Cheers!