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RE: Finish The Story Contest - Fasnachat

in #finishthestory6 years ago

What a brilliant first entry, @erh.germany!
Your third person narration is effective and, by assuming Joelle's point of view, hooks the reader as if she/he's under the fasnachat's spell. I loved the gradual yet sustained rythm and climax along all the story.. wunderbar!

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See me bowing to this really encouraging compliment of yours.
Wunderbar, that you used a German word:)

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