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RE: Finish the Story #50! The Abysmal Biscuit
I saw a fine use of the elements offered by the first part. Probably the most careful and functional. You have been capable to exploit their full narrative potential and, not only, you also inserted the cursed grimoire literary topos/trope (which is always a pleasant note from my pov). This, within the consented words' limit, is a truly engaging story and not only a suggestive scene.