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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #25 - @bananafish

in #finishthestory6 years ago

I was surprised by the direction you took, Cyrus. I know that recently in the endings you're trying to insert some messages about humanity contradictions and about current events, plus you're also focusing on unexpected outcomes.. this time, you've been particularly successful. The story was breathtaking and it revived the horrors that are still alive in everyone's mind, plus with a moment for love within the chaos and fear. I totally agree with the comments of @marcoriccardi and @agmoore. Bravo!

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Thanks! As we keep writing we learn more. Most the stories stay the same. Some stories resonate more.

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