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RE: Finish the Story Contest - The Last Will and Testament of Geralda Connors
There's a lot of excellent character development here! One of the things I liked best about the prompt was the way @gwilberiol sketches the different characters, and I thought you did a great job fleshing them out even further with additonal details. I also dig the courageous moment at the end where Crow declares her feelings for Francine and then, ever the professional, finishes the reading of the will. Nice! :D
Many thanks that you notice the efforts to refine the characters further.
I see that you probably are familiar with this moment when you confess your feelings to another one just by holding the look. Isn't that a great way to tell that one is loving the other?
Smile.
Yes, it all was a theatre play to me. Was good fun to write this ending.