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RE: Diario di Bordo / Logbook - Finish the Story Contest 35
Becoming a rock of scandal, they can no longer be confused with other stones.
That's a great line. I like the memoir style or narratives. It allows for a deeper investigation of the thoughts of the narrator. This felt realistic, the language seemed appropriate as well (rum-sottish, what a great phrase!). I enjoyed reading this.
Thank you! Sometimes I have to invent some word or expression to communicate my convoluted ideas effectively in English. I'm happy when it turns out good!