I like how creatively you included your dislike about using such language in your story :) It's so nice that you added a personal touch to it. I must admit that you surprised me with finishing of your story. I didn't expect it to end so soon and in this way. I liked it! He thought he was the one who was having the power but the girl showed him who is the boss :D GIRL POWER!

Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed reading and I had a lot of fun :)