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RE: 16 days of literature: Particle Ghost
Like how you emphasized her fingers in her cheeks. Reminds us that's really what the artist spent time on. Yet the blindfold catches our attention.
Like how you emphasized her fingers in her cheeks. Reminds us that's really what the artist spent time on. Yet the blindfold catches our attention.
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments!~ Will await yer comments on the other parts of the posts, but I see yah payed attention and noticed what I stressed on.
Haiku throughout with the Finish the Story even. Well done.
Only could you weave together a dream like version using the spirit of the Japanese form in every stanza?
Hey! It was very convenient and I didn't felt like writing in a contemporary format while still keeping the style I've been toying with. Anywho, wanted to play off the Japanese-styled setting while suggesting that he or a friend of his wrote a poem (with the format of haikus) on the matter. And so started off a fun evening of writing haiku stanzas that linked with each other, having fun not only with a 5-7-5 format but hitting (successfully) the 500-word limit. I honestly had to add necessary fluff as I noticed I finally reached where I wanted to be. But what you see here, except at the very end, was completely first-draft and out-n-published as soon as I hit the 500-word limit. (I probably should mention in congruence to combining the haiku format with my style while abiding to a 500-word limit, I wanted to keep going the dialectical theme in the prompt of which I emphasized that through my style and the vast breath the haiku format has for both Metaphysical and Dialectical poetry.)
That's awesome. For this round going to borrow this idea as I think your right that it adds to the setting of the story.
:D :D!!!!~