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RE: Noir or not?

in #finishthestory6 years ago

Here as calluna for foxtales ;)

Oh there is a sadness hiding in this one, a very immersive description. The memory theatre staff caught me for a moment, but it is such a good visual, and works even better when you call back to it. I love how you've used it to give this character more depth and background, also, the implication that possibly, this person, is possibly some other form of being that isn't always in this form adds a fantastical supernatural element to it. Restaining myself from commenting on the next bit here, but love the dual identity aspect, and the mysts, lots weaved in here!

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