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RE: My Entry to the Finish the Story Contest - Week #45!
Ahhh i love the bit where they get out, and only Tres is covered in shit, and then tying in to the classical legends of messages in the music, well yes, clearly Tres should have paid more attention to the words he was singing. You build it brilliantly, Machete opening the secret lock, and i was thinking, must've been an easy code to crack, and then his confidence in what to do what they get inside, but ahhh, you got me! A pro feign there.
Although now you got me wondering... if Machete hid thigns in his music to get the Masons to reach out to him... will you be getting a knock at the door after this lol
Thanks, ya for sure I wanted to put a bit more in so Tres understood more. 500 words though haha. Still a lot of fun to do this and with Curie backing it there is a chance to get a nice boost.
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Yeah that's is, I went a over a bit this time. Some weeks it is so damn hard to get in for it
Curie backs the prizes for the contest but your curie here is entirely cos your story kicks butt <3 (although the contest does help get things noticed)