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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #36! My Entry
Ooo this is good, her having being taken there as leverage over him. The single moments that define a person, her husband willing to defy, see what may happen, having spent months in the bunker, where as the wife, having seen more fo the war, understanding how bad it is, and that as awful as the cost may be, it is always the price of war, the only question is, how much of it will be paid. very much like the ending as well, susie dragged into the ordeal, would love to know what happens next!
Thanks for reading it. I have not continued these very often but this time I might need to make a follow up for this one.