I love your brave strong Shannon, the way you set up her regular delivery of packages leading up to her finding out what was in them, and they way you describe her husband, it has all the feeling of a real story. Her being able to live with what she is doing - just about - until the baby came, and that changing things, really adds to her as a character, and how relatable she is as a person.

The moment where she stands her ground, slapped in the face in a scene you manage to paint as scary, but equally inspirational as she refuses to back down. Somehow i think whatever happens to her, she will be okay, and that baby's smile, i think they both will. Very glad you made this round <3