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RE: Awakenings / Lifeslide - Finish the Story #32
wow you have managed to fit so much in still! This is so impressive! I love the descriptions of the dragonfly emerging into the world. A suicide mission for a greater causing, accidentally awakening a slumbering creature with a single tear, the drop of moisture it had waited for for so long. Something beautifully fitting about it <3
In addition to the dragonfly, I tried to build a whole fantastic food chain, like in those popular nursery rhymes where, in each stanza, one more element is added, and everything is repeated backwards.