RE: The Abysmal Biscuit - Finish the Story #50
Ahhh I am so glad you went this way with it, it's such a fun way to go with it, and it just fits so well the descriptive detail in the first half, it does very much feel like a story full of heart.
I love so much how this changes the opening line in the first half, wonder if @f3nix realized the little set up in there haha
You very elegantly both finish the story, and show the process every one of us have been through, mulling over this old man, and what sounds 'right'
The way you tie the fantasy back to her reality, and give it further depth as a reflection on the life a student who travels with her friends, but instead of getting caught up in the laughter and conversation ends up lost in her daydreams, needing a little magic in her life - beautiful work!
This is an interesting meta-story experiment. Meta at a point that, for a moment, I envisioned and tasted the possibility of a sort of Wes Craven's Nightmare narrative solution. I think that my opening sentence can assurge to a brand new meaning and interesting assonances with the writer's creative process so skillfully described here. Very insightful observation @calluna and compliments to @gaby-crb.