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RE: To the Future: Finish the Story Contest #43
Oh my word, this is such a very beautiful ending, your language throughout is just wonderful
The past hung over their conversation. It was as compelling as the battleship that loomed on the lifeless basalt plateau.
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This is such a well told story, that ties up the first half in exquisite detail. A wonderful tale of resistance and calculation, of exile, and love, the need t accomplish a greater goal. Really fantastic ending <3
I was feeling a little down, a little bit unaccomplished. Thanks for that lift :)