haha ahhh I very much enjoyed this, the way you set out, the mention of not eating heavy stuff at first had me wondering about the costume (could someone be carrying the other person...?), then the performance (would there be balancing... why would weight matter...), and the way you build it, the fun of the park fading into the background as they enter the dark underbelly of the inner workings. And then the reveal of why eating the heavy stuff really mattered. The way you built this around the burgers, and the park, you picked up everything in the first half, and managed to balance a complete story on the points in there so very well, it just comes together so very perfectly!

now as for positive... actually, the more I got into it the harder i found it to define... and really.. this could be argued to be as positive as some of the others... and I wana make that argument haha a new boss who is concerned about them not over eating, how sweet is that! Plus they get to work with sexy Nancy, AND she's a stoner, what more could they want in a girl.. i mean maybe one who'd remember their face and meeting them when the police came asking.. but hey, for a teenage boy, pretty sure that is a positive haha but more to the point Mr Crowder got a happy ending, he gets his show!! I mean... it was at the expense of our main characters, but happy endings oft come at the expense of others... just because it wasn't the main character that got it doesn't mean it wasn't there... And, and, what could be more positive than a cautionary tale with a subtle hint about telling your parents when you get a new job at some dodgy fun fair lol