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RE: My beloved angel - Finish The Story Contest. Week #51
Welcome to the Finish The Story contest, Vida-Blanca! 🎊
You utilized the elements given from the beginning well with your telling of your ending. The addition of Isabella allowed us to see that the protagonist, though hiding something that we're shown later, is one who has a caring and supportive friendship. Then, with the reveal of the photos and the grave of little Gregor, we are given the answer to the mystery that you built as well as the depth to their heartbreak. Thank you for this great story!
~Bris