I agree with @erh.germany. Dense. It's a very very difficult reading for me. Not in the @raj808's way, just to be clear, with his complex similes and descriptions, but in that Felix way where there's a plethora of connections and cross-references and unexpected tectonic twists and a lot (but a lot) of things happening in the span of three sentences. All of this with seasoned with slang and/or archaisms. Go back to a more linear/focused plot like in the Yayo Che prompt (there was also another, I don't remember but it was one for which you've been awarded) and your prolific never-ending imagination will have justice.
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and not dying! Does it make it more incriminating and sinful that I completely forgotten about the prompt, was drunk, was tired and forced myself to complete and cram the story within 500 words and in the span of two to three hours before releasing the story? If you’re wondering, my rough draft was 567+ words in the first hour and every necessary scene was done. Yet I had to cut necessary padding in between those necessary scenes and I forced actions to happen simultaneously even in such necessary scenes. So I managed to barely irk out 500 words when the second hour hit, and now we’re left with essentially a Madness Combat flash animation short... No I ain’t lying that things happen even before a finger snap in both this story and the Madness Combat flash short. Pretty much my story is pure ecstasy, and I probably would’ve fared better with a 1000-word limit. As then I could space the story out with the appropriate padding it needed and let things happen way slower. Oh well.
Heh, I had planned on making the official side-story to Kunst Meister’s story and was thinking of releasing the “official” version regardless of how this turned out. For the “official” version had an actual battle against Mulloch, the flight and battles inside the tower (there’s a giant lift!), It talking to the Grunt (which may or may not connect to the grunt’s in Mr. Pretzel’s apocalypse) and a scene where It spoke words to an unconscious Kunst Meister. (And maybe address the sprout scene since I pretty now added that to my “official” version. So far I am clocking in on 2000 words and could figure some more in.
ROFL.. sorry cmon! Don't take it bad friend! You can make 650? you know I don't mind and I hate being strict.. I'll read this again tomorrow tho