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RE: Noir or not?

in #finishthestory6 years ago

The mist that cleanses, moving both in and through this world is a magical touch, and somehow, feels like an echo of blue lipped Belinda. The impression carefully planted between the lines of dual identity, of another being who 'woke up' in this body. Like a lake between the hills, there is a beautiful story written on the surface, with hints of something much deeper lurking beneath. As entertaining as ever! <3

~ Cal

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UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! Definitely wanted to plant some seeds for the reader to feel this could go a lot of places and definitely justified while being a whole World of its own. Might do an extended post, who knows~ Also a literal double spirit and double identity, two spirits as the Myst suggested and Ms Marta abandoning her Henryk identity with this new unified one. So we’ll have to see~

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