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RE: Finish the Story #44: The story of Mr. Renhe Ren
Welcome back to the contest, Stormlight24!
Your story gives us a great ending with Ren's introspection.
Waiting for someone else's ruin I caused my own.
Time wasted instead of lived. Loved how you tied this into the flow of the rivers waters. Very well written!
We're happy that you dove in and played with us! If you wish, there's still time to cast your vote for your favorite ending.
Thanks a lot. It seemed like a logical trail for ending, I tried to put in a little symbolism too.