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RE: Finish The Story Contest Week 39 My Entry
What a terrific direction to take this story! His dreams had a grander purpose to enrich the lives of not only his village but the world. New ways to learn and inspire thanks to a merchant who listened to the "language of the angels".
As Vartan was drawing the symbols and plans for the school my mind was thinking of a line from Field of Dreams, "If you build it, they will come." And so they did. His dedication to the construction despite his wife's misgivings culminated in sparking the minds, imaginations and even dreams of the people who visited.
Thank you this one was really hard at first and then this idea came to me.