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RE: Waiting for divine help.- SHORT STORY. A finishthestory entry
A terrific interpretation of the wise man's wisdom, Sarez! Bringing in the tiger and the archer (cleverly incorporating a second story within this story 👍) drove home the message to Ren (and the readers) in a visceral way. Better to live and seek answers through your efforts and patience instead of passively waiting for the knowledge until the end of your days.
Thank You! Tried my hand at a "wise man" ending.