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RE: Short Story for Finishthestory contest

in #finishthestory5 years ago

A terrific story worthy of a vote from the Curie community! Congratulations, Sarez!

Your utilization of the box as a test to find a Royal Huntswoman was clever and original. Revealing the old man as a Herald, complete with a drum, who is searching for one to fight for good sets this story up as the beginning of an epic tale. One that could span several storylines. Though some may say stories of finding a fated 'one' are overdone, you gave us a fresh new idea to play with and acknowledged that Joelle still had to believe and make a choice.

I can't think of many who would choose algebra over a life of adventure despite the risk of danger. 😉

~Bris

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