You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Finish the Story #50! The Abysmal Biscuit

in #finishthestory5 years ago

Thanks for another terrific story and congratulations on you well deserved Curie vote! 😎

You've given us one of those perfect stories to tell around a campfire. A girl puts the pieces of the mystery together while running for her life and we're treated to a well written battle for soul! The introduction of the grimoire was a clever touch to not only explain why Joelle was a target but to give her the power to defeat the deviant soul hunter.

It's always enjoyable when the predator has the tables turned on them and you've turned Joelle into a plucky heroine. Move over Buffy, I want more stories of Joelle!

~Bris

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.19
TRX 0.13
JST 0.029
BTC 58809.44
ETH 3151.28
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.43