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RE: Pirate Hunters (Finish The Story Entry)
Release the Krapfen!!
Sorry Cal, I could not help myself! The story is finely crafted in every detail. The pirate language is well dosed and I loved how the Kraken appeared, almost smoothly and horrificly at the same time. You were also capable of transmitting some powerful and evocative sceness like:
and the victorious bellow of steel through wood echoed out of a hundred lungs.
One last note: we do want robo-pirates!