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RE: Obstinancy (Finish The Story)

in #finishthestory6 years ago

I liked the descriptive parts about the night giving way to dawn. Hisaac fury was also noteworthy. I don't think that cutting the scene of the fight between Kat and the bearded vamp penalised the plot but the contrary. A finely crafted scene.

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