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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #36 - @bananafish
I agree with @calluna. I would add that poor working conditions should never justify to take advantage of an incompetent. Your ending is raw and opens reflections on human alienation and abuses over the weakest.. from a style point of view, the story is written with attention to details and smooth. Welcome again to the contest, keep it up!