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RE: The Breach: Finish the Story Week #32
I loved your characterization of the protagonists and I've to say that your writing a beginning was a stroke of genius. It worked well, convincing and natural. The Pandora's box effect was another plus: never be superb toward laws of nature.
Thank you! Couldn't get away from the Greeks when I wrote this. Thought about Icarus, hubris, Prometheus. About pride and envy. Of course, you started it all. Not my fault :)