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RE: Finish the Story Contest - Week #58!
Adventurous and a perfect prelude for interesting narrative developments. I liked how you characterised the dialogues of the two teenagers and their spontaneity. This prompt was really open, I realise that it wasn't an easy task to give it a conclusion within the words' limit. I would be curious to read your 2000 words version with its many nuances.