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RE: Pray and Work - Finish The Story #54

in #finishthestory5 years ago

Holy crow, Gaby! Your story thrusts those tapered fingers into our chests to wrench our hearts.

We come in to your story knowing that there's something behind Flynn's eyes and within his heart that is heavy. You gave us more depth to his relationship with and caring for the sweet Agnes. This is incredibly well written along with the stark contrast that comes to light of Flynn's feelings for Thoram following the reveal of the Father's deception. Though his decision was made with good intentions of protecting the boy, a mistruth to that degree isn't easily forgiven. This is a heartbreakingly good story.

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